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                          200701393 Park Jun Hyung

                                     30 JUN 2010

The worst waiter

The worst waiter I met in Sydney

Have you met the worst waiter in a fancy restaurant? Most waiters and waitresses are hardworking, professional people, and many circumstances are out of their control, from food preparation to seating time. But there are always a few bad apples (or just bad days) in any industry, and we've all probably been on the receiving end of rude, indifferent, or just plain baffling wait staff behavior. I've seen the worst waiter when I visited Sydney last winter. My friend in Sydney brought me to the famous Italian restaurant. When we waited in line the waiter was speaking to the couples in front of us rather rudely. We tried to not be bothered by that, but when it came to our turn, she very rudely asked us to chill out and wait. I was shocked and my friend was very angry. When she returned to her spot, she snatched the menu and said "Well, come on". We followed and discussed that we were going to ask to speak to the manager. We were seated and did ask. She literally started yelling at us in the middle of this place. I was so embarrassed and ashamed that everybody in the restaurant was staring at us as if we were the people who demanded unreasonable favor to the waitress. After just getting over the situation by talking to the manager, the worst experience kept continued. We ordered a fairly high-priced bottle of wine and when our waitress, the same person who yelled at us, attempted to open the bottle and she broke the cork. Instead of retrieving a new bottle, she shoved the rest of the cork into the bottle -- sticking her finger all the way into our bottle and dipping it into our wine. She wiped her finger off on her apron and attempted to serve the wine to us like it was no big deal. The night dealing with the worst waiter at DEROSA, an Italian restaurant in Sydney, was my worst experience from any of restaurants.

 

 

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2 comments:

  1. 1. What I like about this writing is that it explains well enough why you think she is the worst waitress by including many examples. Your main point seems that the worst waitress is the one who is inconsiderate, who doesn't care about customers' feelings. I like "she snatched the menu and said "Well, come on." the most. Quotation makes the essay a lot more energetic and vivid. The connection in this line "But there are always few bad apples in indstry, and we all ~." did not came to me clear. For improvement, it feels like the intorduction part, the hook is a bit long for a paragraph.

    2. What I like most about this piece of writing is it clearly shows the steps of obtaining driver's license and types of driver's license. Your main point seems to be gaining driver's license is simple and easy. This particular line "Are you one of them? If so~" is my favorite because this interrogative sentence well leads to the main point smooth and naturally. "You are asked to drive a car through complicated course~" makes me wonder what would it be this complicated course. I can't think of any point that needs to be improved.

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  2. What I like about this piece of writing(the worst waiter) is that the style. The author is a good storyteller who can actually make the reader get interested in one's writing. The author uses simple but clear examples and it's easy to understand. Your main point seems to be that you met your worst waiter in a Italian restaurant in Sydney. These particular words struck me as powerful : "Instead of retrieving a new bottle, she shoved the rest of the cork into the bottle -- sticking her finger all the way into our bottle and dipping it into our wine." This was a very humorous, vivid description what the worst waiteress did. The one change you could make is that you could describe the waitress' facial expression, apperance, tone of voice more so that the reader can imagine about your episode and get more interested in your story. -Jiyoon Bae

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